{"id":227,"date":"2014-11-19T19:19:36","date_gmt":"2014-11-20T00:19:36","guid":{"rendered":"http:\/\/blogs.bu.edu\/caswr100n1n2-24\/?page_id=227"},"modified":"2014-12-08T21:57:34","modified_gmt":"2014-12-09T02:57:34","slug":"presentation-notes-on-1118","status":"publish","type":"page","link":"https:\/\/blogs.bu.edu\/caswr100n1n2-24\/other\/final-argument-reflections\/presentation-notes-on-1118\/","title":{"rendered":"Presentation Notes on 11\/18"},"content":{"rendered":"<p>Because I presented on 11\/18, I will talk about my presentation first. My theme of portfolio essay is I made progress in developing clarity through writing the three papers. I said my exhibit sources would be three feedback of paper 1, 2, 3 and the first essay in the reading assignment \u201cSample Ethnographies\u201d. Dori pointed out I should use my own writing as an exhibit source instead of using others\u2019 writing. So I need to think about how to change these others\u2019 writing to my own writing. Maybe I will write some reflection notes for them and use the reflection notes as my exhibit sources. Tommy also suggested me to compare the first drafts and the final drafts of my papers so I can show how they became clearer than the previous one. I think this is a good idea.<\/p>\n<p>Weijun talked about her experience in WR098 with Professor Kim. I think I can use this experience as well because I was also in Professor Kim\u2019s WR098 class. Maybe I can briefly talk about my clarity in WR098 essays in my portfolio because I think writing is a process which is not limited in one semester but in my whole life.<\/p>\n","protected":false},"excerpt":{"rendered":"<p>Because I presented on 11\/18, I will talk about my presentation first. My theme of portfolio essay is I made progress in developing clarity through writing the three papers. I said my exhibit sources would be three feedback of paper 1, 2, 3 and the first essay in the reading assignment \u201cSample Ethnographies\u201d. Dori pointed &hellip; <a href=\"https:\/\/blogs.bu.edu\/caswr100n1n2-24\/other\/final-argument-reflections\/presentation-notes-on-1118\/\" class=\"more-link\">Continue reading <span class=\"screen-reader-text\">Presentation Notes on 11\/18<\/span> <span class=\"meta-nav\">&rarr;<\/span><\/a><\/p>\n","protected":false},"author":5015,"featured_media":0,"parent":252,"menu_order":0,"comment_status":"open","ping_status":"closed","template":"","meta":[],"_links":{"self":[{"href":"https:\/\/blogs.bu.edu\/caswr100n1n2-24\/wp-json\/wp\/v2\/pages\/227"}],"collection":[{"href":"https:\/\/blogs.bu.edu\/caswr100n1n2-24\/wp-json\/wp\/v2\/pages"}],"about":[{"href":"https:\/\/blogs.bu.edu\/caswr100n1n2-24\/wp-json\/wp\/v2\/types\/page"}],"author":[{"embeddable":true,"href":"https:\/\/blogs.bu.edu\/caswr100n1n2-24\/wp-json\/wp\/v2\/users\/5015"}],"replies":[{"embeddable":true,"href":"https:\/\/blogs.bu.edu\/caswr100n1n2-24\/wp-json\/wp\/v2\/comments?post=227"}],"version-history":[{"count":2,"href":"https:\/\/blogs.bu.edu\/caswr100n1n2-24\/wp-json\/wp\/v2\/pages\/227\/revisions"}],"predecessor-version":[{"id":229,"href":"https:\/\/blogs.bu.edu\/caswr100n1n2-24\/wp-json\/wp\/v2\/pages\/227\/revisions\/229"}],"up":[{"embeddable":true,"href":"https:\/\/blogs.bu.edu\/caswr100n1n2-24\/wp-json\/wp\/v2\/pages\/252"}],"wp:attachment":[{"href":"https:\/\/blogs.bu.edu\/caswr100n1n2-24\/wp-json\/wp\/v2\/media?parent=227"}],"curies":[{"name":"wp","href":"https:\/\/api.w.org\/{rel}","templated":true}]}}