Pamela Wheaton Shorr is a middle school teacher in Salem and a professional writer…She has recently become an avid Boston Bruins fan and the proud owner(wearer) of a #37 jersey…<\/p>\n
It\u2019s March Madness in Massachusetts \u2013 and as any public school teacher knows, that has nothing to do with basketball and everything to do with the start of this year\u2019s standardized testing. In cities across the Bay State, teachers are busy reviewing tricky MCAS vocabulary, deconstructing questioning syntax that could trip up understanding, and reminding kids of strategies for answering multi-part open response questions. But mainly, we\u2019re talking about what to do when faced with the dreaded Long Comp<\/i>, an untimed writing exam meant to ferret out whether a kid is able to write thoughtful, carefully crafted pieces in response to a specific writing \u2018prompt\u2019. Easy \u2013 or at least manageable \u2013 for students with strong language skills, the test can be agony for any child who struggles with writing, organizing thoughts, thinking critically about a topic, or even talking about him or herself.<\/p>\n
The Long Comp writing test is administered in 4th<\/sup>, 7th<\/sup> and 10th<\/sup> grades and consists of two untimed sessions that can literally take some students all day to complete. Students respond to a prompt that is meant to get their creative and intellectual juices flowing. Example: \u201cThink of a skill that you would like to or have learned outside of school. In a well-developed essay, describe the skill and explain why it is interesting and important to you.\u201d<\/i> All you need to do is imagine a tongue-tied, insecure seventh grader getting this idea starter, and you get an idea of the problem. During practice writing sessions, this is what we hear: \u201cI don\u2019t HAVE any skills!\u201d \u201cI don\u2019t DO anything outside of school!\u201d \u201cSkateboarding isn\u2019t a \u2018skill\u2019!\u201d \u201cI don\u2019t know WHY I like it!\u201d<\/p>\n The number of steps it takes to break this prompt into something doable is extraordinary, and it\u2019s part of the reason students panic during writing exams. Students have got to think about the definition of a \u2018skill\u2019 \u2013 does that include cooking? Reading? They\u2019ve got to analyze whether they have any skills \u2013 not easy for a kid who feels unsure of him or herself. What if they don\u2019t have any enrichment outside of school \u2013 does it count if they\u2019re in an acting club during school hours? What if they don\u2019t really know much about this skill, but it looks fun? What are they going to say about it? And most importantly for a middle schooler \u2013 what kind of exposure are they willing to risk? Isn\u2019t it bragging to say they\u2019re skilled at acting? Do they really <\/i>want anyone to know about their innermost hopes and dreams?<\/p>\n Getting a \u20186\u2019, the highest mark for topic development, requires \u201c<\/i>rich topic\/idea development; careful and\/or subtle organization; and effective\/rich use of language\u201d,<\/i> according to the Massachusetts Department of Elementary and Secondary Education. Teachers will gripe that to get a 6, a kid has to be attending Harvard Extension School on the weekend and fluent in six languages…and don\u2019t even get us started on the philosophy and \u2018authenticity\u2019 behind writing to a prompt! The 2010 4th<\/sup> grade Long Comp prompt on the joys of having a day off from school (aka \u2018a snow day\u2019) caused a furor at the time \u2013 as many students had never experienced one and had no idea what to write!<\/p>\n What to do to help our kids get through a day that requires stamina, vision and finesse? We\u2019re a sports town, after all. The first round of the NCAA playoffs may be starting this week, the Red Sox may be strutting their stuff at spring training, and the Patriots may be restocking for next year, but in my heart, there\u2019s only one Boston team \u2013 and one Boston sports star \u2013 to guide my kids through the Long Comp. Patrice Bergeron and the Big Bad Bruins.<\/p>\n It\u2019s hard not to get inspired by a guy who refuses to leave the ice during a critical playoff game, even though he\u2019s got a punctured lung. I tell my kids that Bergeron played through the 2013 Stanley Cup Finals with a separated shoulder, a broken rib, torn cartilage and, eventually, a punctured lung. The only thing lower than some of my students\u2019 interest in writing a \u2018well developed\u2019 essay is their stamina to do so. But with the help of Bergeron\u2019s unflinching stick-to-it-iveness, I can make the point to well, suck it up. Still whining? I throw in Greg \u2018Soupie\u2019 Campbell\u2019s choice to stay on the ice and help kill off a penalty after breaking his leg, and for good measure, I mention honorary ex-Bruin Rich Peverley, who literally died<\/i> on the bench and asked to return to the game after being resuscitated. Now pick up the pencil, children!<\/p>\n Maybe you can\u2019t figure out what skill to write about, and maybe you aren\u2019t even sure whether you have a skill, I say. But you have to start somewhere, and what\u2019s more, you\u2019ve got to play the position you\u2019re given. Though Patrice Bergeron was called up for this year\u2019s Canadian Olympic team, his position kept getting shifted around. Instead of getting flustered, Bergeron\u2019s response was simple.\u00a0 \u201cWhatever it takes, right? I\u2019m just happy to be here\u2026Whether it\u2019s the right side, the left side, it doesn\u2019t\u00a0matter to me,\u201d he told an NBC reporter. (Source: http:\/\/nesn.com\/2014\/02\/patrice-bergeron-excels-in-canadas-somewhat-sloppy-olympic-opener\/<\/b><\/a>) \u00a0And by the end of the Olympics, Bergeron was being hailed as the \u201cbest all-around player in hockey\u201d and the \u201cgreatest defensive forward in the world\u201d \u2013 something that sports fans in Boston already know firsthand.<\/p>\n By far my favorite story about Patrice Bergeron starts way before he became a Bruin, and it\u2019s key for the kids who think they just can\u2019t do it, no matter what their Nike T-shirts tell them. It\u2019s a story I read online, and if it isn\u2019t true, please don\u2019t tell me or my students. Sometimes, I say, you just have to wait it out. You need to study the game. You get that Long Comp prompt and you\u2019ve got nothing? Just breathe. According to this story, Bergeron\u2019s father took his son to a rink when he was about five to introduce him to Canada\u2019s national sport. Bergy sat in the net and didn\u2019t move \u2013 for two months. While his parents contemplated introducing young Patrice to a different sport, Bergeron was simply watching and absorbing, learning the ice, and, according to his dad, falling in love with the game. And when the boy finally got moving, he was one of the best skaters on the ice.<\/p>\n I have no idea if the story of Patrice Bergeron does my kids a bit of good, whether his basic humility and willingness to do what\u2019s required, his stamina and ability to look at the whole ice and respond accordingly is a lesson to anyone but me. I am not really a sports fanatic, but ever since this New Jersey girl discovered Bobby Orr and fell in love with the Bruins, I have been searching for the next Bobby. In Patrice Bergeron, I think I\u2019ve found him.<\/p>\n I have no idea if the story does my students any good, but I know what Patrice Bergeron has taught me. Bergeron\u2019s stamina, work ethic, imagination, humility, and just plain \u2018gumption\u2019 reminds me that even in the midst of MCAS Madness, I have one and only one job. It\u2019s up to me to keep skating as hard and fast as I can for my<\/i> \u2018team\u2019 \u2013 the students in my classroom. It\u2019s my job to find the open man, to make holes for the players who aren\u2019t open, to feed my students the puck so that they can score, to cheer when they take their victory laps, to bump fists and get back to it. The \u2018best all-around player in hockey\u2019 offers some lessons that cannot be lost on teachers, either. 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