Since the paper should be very objective and the claim should be very arguable as mentioned on syllabus, I have spent a long time to try to figure out a very stable background and then pull out an arguable claim. I am still not sure if my claim is arguable enough. Besides, I feel worried about whether my evidence is enough. I used only one example from my in-class survey with my group members, and the rest of evidences are based on my knowledge and the information from other sources.