Writing skills are not only about the grammar and clarity, but also about how to use the evidences and how to develop the thesis from asking questions, or to be more specific, how to ask thoughtful and deep questions in order to make the claim specific enough. By comparing the draft and final papers , we could find these improvements.

Since my portfolio is going to about both writing skills and inspiring thoughts about food. I need to come up with a way to connect them together, and think more about how to use the background resource in order to show the improvements about the thoughts and skills.